Enyo/Erebos, The Lamb and the Wolf (WIP)

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Enyo/Erebos, The Lamb and the Wolf (WIP)

Post by Beedrill on Sun Jan 10, 2016 2:39 pm

Hello to anyone that views this character, I have received special permission to do a double character from Avaritia and Alice Hope, if you are thinking of doing the same, please ask a staff member if you can, this is your warning.


Core Information

Name: Erebos Melanthios
Nickname/Alias: Wolf
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Birthplace: Viridian City
Trainer Classification: Trainer
Character Tracker: Viridian City




Physical Attributes

Height: 5'9"
Weight: 162 Lbs
Appearance:

Defining Traits:



Personality

Personality:


Strengths: Strength
Weaknesses: Too aggressive, less intellect than most, easily fazed by an insult, lost without Lamb (becomes more aggressive)
Battle Style: Forceful, Strike as much as possible, Close



Background

History:
Born into a family of hot heads, his parents were constantly fighting each other, even over little things, so growing up, it was only natural for him to be like that. 6 years old is when he started bullying other kids, he would push them, call them names, anything to help him relieve stress, of course, it was piled back on when he was scolded. Almost every other week, he comes up with new ways to relieve stress in an aggressive way, and a year later, he broke something and the cops had finally got involved, and his parents had to pay for different charges. This led to the family breaking apart entirely, the parents fought over little things, but now their son is getting involved with the police and being a money issue, the two finally separated and left each other after a year, the child was left with his father. His father kept a closer eye on his child since he isn't in a constant argument anymore, he even thought it be best that he lock Erebos in his room for every time he got in trouble.

A year of this happening, a year of useless attempt to keep him out of trouble and he decided to run off somewhere quiet, so it was the woods he decided to go to. He reached his destination and with anger running in his blood still, he did what he knew best, he punched the closest living thing, a tree. He felt a warm liquid on the end of his fist and as he pulled back his hand to see what it was he felt, a girl ran out and asked him a simple yet stupid question "you alright, dear friend?" he was startled by this surprise welcome, but suddenly felt his blood starting to boil. "You idiot! Get out of my face before I strike you too!" he yelled at her, she sat down and he could tell that she was obviously scared, but she then asked "Your wounds, may I be of help?" he was confused 'Is she not scared of me? How dimwitted is this girl?! I will make her fear me then!' he raised his fist, and she flinched to this movement. "If you don't leave me alone, I will hurt you!" he threatened again, the girl shivered even more, tears had started to appear on her face, but she kept on surprising him with every little action she made. She had gotten up and ran to him, she wrapped her arms around him and was crying heavily "Please don't dear friend! You wouldn't strike for I am innocent! I want to help you is all!" Erebos was shocked and unsure of what just happened, as his fist started to slowly go down, his voice was much quieter this time "I could hurt you so badly right now..." he felt her arms get tighter.

After that weird scenario the day prior, he decided that it'd be best to avoid the forest from now on, but the forest decided to ignore his intentions. "Quit following me..." he said. There, following him, was Forest Girl "But friend, your never around others, you must be lonely" she had said many time almost every time Erebos told her to leave him alone, he heard this almost everyday. "Quit calling me friend..." he said "You look as though you need one" she responde "I have enough..." he mumbled "You mean the ones you hurt dear friend? You know you sho-" "Stay out of my business!" he snapped. This went on for months, conversations like this everyday, Erebos bullying less people than normal.

A year later, "No! Please don't! I'll give you my money already just leave me be!" said a random kid, Erebos was in the process of earning his 'allowance' when Forest Girl was around. "Dear friend stop! There is no need to hurt the innocent!" she said as she jumped out of a nearby bush and grabbed his arm "Wh- why are you here?! Never Mind... it doesn't matter, I need money so I can get some food... Now get off me!" he seemed to almost attempt biting at her. He knew he usually doesn't do anything like this to her, but this was important to him, it was obvious to him that she flinched. "I'm sorry, but friend this is cruel, please listen to what I say, don't do this!" She said to him, she pulled out an apple and a few other fruits and berries "If you want, I have lunch I will always be willing to share with you" A long pause, before finally "Fine, you win this one... both of you do, and you! I want you up and gone in the next few minutes!" Erebos said, and the other kid got up "Okay okay! Oh, and miss, thank you for helping me" he bowed "Get going!" he yipped after being yelled at and ran off. Forest Girl walks over to the bush and grabs a sack that she probably left there, and walked back over "He was nice, why attempt hurting him?" she said as she sat down and opened the sack, she started placing all the fruits in front of both of them "I already told you, I needed the money for food" "There is more, I can tell" "And I've told you to stay out of my business before..." "Minor words used to avoid telling of truth" "And your starting to get annoying again... let's hurry up and eat" Enyo giggled before saying "Okay okay... you win this one" she giggled again.

Two years has passed, and during that time Erebos has not bullied a single living person. Some of kids seem completely unfazed by him whenever he walks by, but Erebos doesn't have the attitude as everyone so people still try to avoid talking to, the only one who talks to him is "I think it's about time we learn names dear friend, as you seem to hate being called friend, tell me yours, and I shall give you mine" Forest Girl has asked. She was right, they never exchanged names, though Erebos is use to everyone knowing his name so found no reason to tell her, but that mean he shouldn't know hers. "Alright, if you really must know... It's Erebos, what about yours?" he asked her. She looked him in the eyes "I don't have an official, dear Erebos. However I have found and kept the name Enyo" she said, this left Erebos confused and she must have noticed "I don't have a family like most do, so I may have been born nameless. My family is that of pokemon, not humans." "And that's why you always seem to be in the forest... I see..." Erebos finished.

He remains silent before Enyo perked up "You know dear Erebos, I heard some use say your like an aggressive wolf, I think your more of a lone wolf, less loyal, less strategic, but more elegant" she tells him "interesting... good to know that those other people are talking about me behind my ba-" Erebos started but Enyo cut him off "Please settle down, I think it's a fantastic nickname, don't you say dear Erebos?" Erebos remained silent. "Oh please don't get all huffy dear Wolf, we don't want you blowing a house down" Enyo said, seemingly remembering a nursery rhyme he had told her a while ago, Erebos sighed before responding "So I'm guessing you want we to call you Pig?" Enyo giggled "Of course not, but I like this conversation dear Wolf, how about something else?" Erebos had to think about this, he never really thought of nicknames for anyone, other than basic ones that are used for almost everyone and are known for being rude. Erebos looked at her and shrugged "I have no idea" he told her "Would you like help dear Wolf? Think of both our personalities in a nutshell" Enyo gave him a smile "and tie that knowledge to your nickname to figure out mine" she said. Erebos thought for a moment, he eventually realized that they are both opposite, but he isn't sure whats opposite to a wolf. He looks at Enyo with a confused look "Something opposite of a wolf? So something like... rabbit... lamb... pig... sheep..." Enyo perked up when she heard the second one "I like second one, what do you think dear Wolf?" He thought for a second to figure out which one it was "Was it... Lamb?" he asked her. Enyo smiled and nodded "That dear Wolf, is perfect, I knew you'd find something" she giggled "Lamb and Wolf... not exactly opposites... but it'll do I guess" he says. He then proceeded into doing something he has never done before, he smile, which Enyo noticed and gave him a smile of her own and eventually the two hugged.

In the next two years, though the two have gotten closer, but Wolf hasn't smiled since, and he is even having a few arguments with some people or make some people sad. "This is getting a bit much dear Wolf, I'm going to teach you how to apologize" Lamb tells him "Your going to teach me how to say 'I'm sorry'? Why? I can say it perfectly fine" Wolf says, a little annoyed by her comment "You can say it, but you make it obvious you don't mean it dear Wolf, so I'm going to teach you a phrase to say each time you have to apologize. Try repeating after me... I am truly sorry for being so rude" Lamb begins "I'm... not following with this..." Wolf says with a sigh. Lamb took a step away from him and turned away "Fine, I guess I'll just leave you dear Wolf, seeing as you want to be rude to me" Wolf almost seemed to growl at the thought of this before breathing a big breath of air out, he repeated back to her "I am truly sorry for being so rude" Lamb turned back to him and smiled. "Good, but stand up a little more as you say it dear Wolf, and don't fake it, now say... I am truly sorry for being so rude, I hope I haven't caused to much pain." Wolf was about to rebel, but sighed and followed her command. This repeated until he had seemed to be able to stand straight enough, sound as if it seemed he meant it, and remembered the whole phrase 'I am truly sorry for being so rude, I hope I haven't cause to much pain and I also hope you eventually forgive me' but it didn't end. She had him repeat this up to five times a day, just for him to get slowly better and will always remember the phrase, and in about a month, it was considered 'good enough' by Lamb.

For the last two years, there was no difference in how many time Wolf had got into arguments or made some people upset, but how long they have lasted has definitely shorten in lengths. "You know, we've been in this town for a long time dear Wolf. I want to leave this place and learn more about the world, oh please won't you come with me dear Wolf!" Lamb asked him. Wolf looked at her confused, he wasn't exactly sure what they could do "Well... the answer is yes but... what are we going to do out there?" he asked her. "You could try going against the gyms like you've talked about dear Wolf" she said, she got closer to him and wrapped her arms around one of his "I think it'd be fun" She finished. Wolf sighed "Fine, we are going to go, but is there anyone you want to say goodbye to before we do" he asked her "No, I think they'll eventually realize it dear Wolf" she smiled, still hugging his arm. "Then let's go... this is our quest" Wolf started and Lamb finished with "to succeed" and that is when they decided to walk down route 2 to begin their adventure.


Defining Moments: Being the city's 'bully', Meeting Lamb, Lamb preventing him from hurting anyone






Name: Enyo (Last name unknown)
Nickname/Alias: Lamb
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Birthplace: Unknown (Viridian Forest)
Trainer Classification: Adventure
Character Tracker: Viridian City




Physical Attributes

Height: 5'2"
Weight: 120 Lbs
Appearance:

Defining Traits:



Personality

Personality:


Strengths: Intellect, is not fazed by insults
Weaknesses: Not as physically strong as most, Lost without Wolf (Thoughts become more focused on Wolf)
Battle Style: Analyze, Strike where it's weak, Range



Background

History:
She had parents who didn't want to raise her, knowing that the pokemon probably would, they left her in the forest around the age 4 to 5 years old. Born by humans, yet raised by Pokemon, this concept wasn't new to anyone, there has been a few who was like this as humans can be cruel. Just like other humans like her, she learned everything that pokemons can teach a human; crawl, walk, and even speak. After about 8 years of her life, around the time when some of the psychic pokemon were helping teach her how to read, she wandered about for a while before finding something etched onto a tree, the thing was a few letters spelling out Enyo, she had troubles reading it, but eventually, she manages to say it. That is what the pokemon started calling her, and she loved it, it was her first step of being part of the human world, other than the fact she was human, but more on the society part, she'll be able visit it.

2 year later a kid, around the age of 9, entered the forest and she decided to carefully watch him. A shock hit her as she watched, the fellow human punched a tree and left red liquid running down the side of it. She sat there stunned for a while before running out asking if he was alright, but something even more shocking then what happened earlier just happened, he had threatened her. She sat down and shivered, but proceeded to make sure he was okay, she asked then if she could tend to his wound. Another threat was thrown at her, she felt water droplets fall from her eyes, she was scared, but he was hurt! She got up, feeling that she was crying even worse and hugged him, hoping that this would comfort his rage, she then told him not to hurt her and that she only wanted to help. There was a moment of silence, before he said one final threat, one that was more gentle and ironically comforting.

She watched him the next day, following him and keeping him company. He asked her to leave him alone several time

Defining Moments: Living in the forest with pokemon, Meeting Wolf, Learning about the human world from Wolf



Other Information
The two, even if separated, will be kept in one post just to make sure the staff don't have to do more modding than needed

Staff member, good idea on options for the pokemon list, you can either give me two sets of choices for each character, let both characters choose from one set, or even only have one pokemon chosen from the set for both (although it's not saying you have to, they are possible options (And I feel the third option is fairest, but the first is the more fitting, the second is a mix of both :P))

Also, I'm going with the whole idea that regular animals still exist (but are much rarer or kept on farms)



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Re: Enyo/Erebos, The Lamb and the Wolf (WIP)

Post by Felix Leonis on Fri Jan 15, 2016 9:45 am

Even if I'm not a mod, I will give you these pointers as provided usually by the site's mods and admins.

1. plz expand on your personality in a significant manner, it rly needs to be fleshed out considerably.

2. Both Lamb and Wolf's history may be a bit more in depth. These are two characters molded into a single account, so without question...you'll need two people's worth of history :P (same goes for the above basically)

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Re: Enyo/Erebos, The Lamb and the Wolf (WIP)

Post by Beedrill on Fri Jan 15, 2016 1:54 pm

Felix, it's not done yet, that's why the title says (WIP) still XP

And trust me, I'm no wheres NEAR done with the history

Also, there's nothing in personality, so I can't exactly expand on anything (and because I like math, it's like 0 times any number is 0, so I have to add something to it first XD)

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